Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Posted

@lanefu, @TonyMac32  I am looking for support of native english speakers.

 

I just wanted to install RPi-Monitor, listed all options to find it: armbianmonitor --help  and saw this :

armbianmonitor -M provides simple CLI monitoring - fixed-line output

armbianmonitor -N provides simple CLI network monitoring - fixed-line output

So, I thought what has been repaired  (fixed) ?  

 

So, I tested the two options -m & -M   and I saw,

    -m is with history, not scrolling rather new-line feed
    -M is dynamically refreshing in line (static), (fix,  but not fixed)

In short, I think the wording is a bit bumpy.  My suggestion to change wording, as below:

armbianmonitor -m provides simple CLI monitoring - new-line feed output
armbianmonitor -M provides simple CLI monitoring - automatic refreshing in line output
armbianmonitor -n provides simple CLI network monitoring - new-line feed output
armbianmonitor -N provides simple CLI network monitoring - automatic refreshing in line output

What do you think?

Posted

The word "automatic" could imply that the other outputs are not automatically refreshing.

  • Tido changed the title to armbianmonitor - service description
Posted

Hi Werner, not only that, while thinking about it I realized that the title of my posting is wrong - it is the service description not the naming conventions :)

 

3 hours ago, Werner said:

are not automatically refreshing

I agree with you, as a Swiss (non native speaker). Does it explain itself better like this:

armbianmonitor -m provides simple CLI monitoring - automatic new-line feed output
armbianmonitor -M provides simple CLI monitoring - automatic refreshing in line output
armbianmonitor -n provides simple CLI network monitoring - automatic new-line feed output
armbianmonitor -N provides simple CLI network monitoring - automatic refreshing in line output

 

By the way, everybody is welcome to chime in !

 

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

Terms of Use - Privacy Policy - Guidelines